Next Wallpaper Set (Darkstalkers?) part A

[elfenstein]

Hi,

here is my next try at a dual monitor wallpaper set.

I am not totally content how these turned out, but I can't put my finger on what is wrong or lacking.

Any suggestions?

P.S.: The second wallpaper is in my other thread.

Have fun,

elfenstein.

[The Rebel]

Well, after taking a look I can't see anything wrong or missing. It actually looks excellent.

[Foxxer]

If they're for a dual-monitor setup, why not put the text on the right side of one of them?

Lots of jaggies around the tips of the character's wings.

The text is too sharp compared with everything else in the image, and the font itself is dull. Try using a more freeform font?